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« Thread Started on Aug 21, 2008, 6:43pm »
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Danny had fell from the sky in hit a tree. Danny got up man that hurt "Danny said?,". Where am i "Danny said to his self?,". Danny got real bored in went to sleep from boredom. Danny had woke up mad because he did not no where he was in that he was alone by himself.Danny yelled as loud as he could so someone could hear him.
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« Reply #1 on Aug 21, 2008, 9:15pm »
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OOC: Okay, please post a paragraph minumum, as in, 3+ lines. And talk like this.
"What was that?", Yuri questioned.
The " marks go around what you're saying.
And by the way, In means inside something like inside a building while and refers to two or more things, like, this and that.
I'm just trying to help you out with roleplaying, please don't be offended.
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